

Written by Raze Edgar
Published
Marcus woke up to the sound of helicopters.
He jerked upright, confused. Sunlight streamed through the broken warehouse windows. His ankle throbbed. His whole body ached.
How long had he been asleep?
He checked his watch. He must have stolen it from a sporting goods store yesterday. He didn’t even remember doing it. It said 9:47 AM.
Day six.
The helicopters circled overhead, low enough that he could hear the rotors clearly. Police helicopters. Looking for him.
Marcus limped to the window and peered out carefully. The industrial district was crawling with activity. Police cars, news vans, crowds of people behind barricades.
They were searching the area. Getting close.
He needed to move.
Marcus grabbed his backpack and headed for the back of the warehouse. There was a loading dock door, partly open. He squeezed through and found himself in an alley full of dumpsters.
The thread pulsed on his finger. It had been quiet all night, letting him rest. But now it was waking up. Getting hungry again.
Marcus felt it reaching out, searching for nearby people to feed on.
“No,” he said quietly. “Not yet. Give me one more day. Please.”
The thread hesitated. Then, surprisingly, it pulled back and went dormant again. Like it was granting him a final request.
Marcus limped through the alley, staying low, avoiding the main streets. His face was probably on every news channel by now. Teen mass murderer.
Killed sixty-seven people in six days.
He wondered if his mom had seen the news. If she knew what he’d become.
Probably better if she didn’t.
Marcus made it three blocks before he saw the roadblock.
The police had sealed off the entire industrial district. They were checking everyone coming in or out, looking for him.
He ducked into a convenience store and grabbed a hoodie off a rack. He put it on and pulled the hood up. The cashier looked at him suspiciously.
“You gonna pay for that?”
Marcus reached into his pocket. He had maybe forty dollars left. He put a twenty on the counter.
“Keep it,” he said, and walked out before the cashier could respond.
In the reflection of the store window, Marcus saw his face. The red threads covered almost everything now. His left eye was completely dark. His right eye was starting to turn.
He looked like something from a horror movie.
A little girl walking past with her mother pointed at him. “Mommy, that boy looks sick.”
The mother pulled her daughter close and hurried past, shooting Marcus a nervous glance.
He pulled the hood lower and kept walking.
By noon, Marcus found himself at the edge of town. The north side, near the old quarry that had been abandoned for years.
The thread was pulling him somewhere specific now. Not toward people. Toward a place.
He followed it up a dirt road, through a gap in a chain-link fence, into the quarry.
The place was a pit of broken rock and stagnant water. Graffiti covered the warning signs. Teenagers came here sometimes to drink or smoke, but today it was empty.
The thread led him to the edge of the water.
And there, sitting on a rock, was another version of himself.
This one looked different from Thomas or Cassidy. Older, maybe in his mid-twenties. Covered in scars. His eyes were completely black, like he’d been part of the thread for a long time.
“Hello, Marcus,” the version said. “I’m version twenty-two. I died in 1875. Been waiting for you.”
Marcus sat down heavily on a nearby rock. His ankle couldn’t take much more walking. “Why here?”
“Because this is neutral ground. The thread is weak here. Something about the minerals in the rock interferes with it. We can talk without it listening.”
“The thread is always listening.”
“Not here. Not completely.” Version twenty-two gestured at the water. “There are places in the world where the thread’s influence is weaker.
Ancient places. Liminal spaces. This quarry sits on one of those spots. The Native Americans who lived here knew it. They avoided this place. Said it was where the veil was thin.”
Marcus looked around. He didn’t feel any different. The thread was still on his finger, still pulsing quietly.
“If the thread is weak here, why isn’t it stronger somewhere else? Why doesn’t it just avoid places like this?”
“Because it’s everywhere and nowhere. It exists in all places at once. But some places resist it better than others. Here, for a few hours, we can talk honestly. No manipulation. No lies.”
“Okay.” Marcus leaned forward. “Then tell me the truth. Is there any way to stop this?”
Version twenty-two was quiet for a long moment. Then: “Define stop.”
“End it. Permanently. Break the cycle so it never happens again.”
“There are three ways. The first is what your reflection told you. Complete the cycle, then destroy yourself completely at the moment of connection. Collapse the web by removing a critical node.”
“That kills everyone connected to it.”
“Yes. All the survivors across all timelines. All the versions in the between-space. Maybe a hundred people total. But it would work. The thread would have to start over from scratch. Rebuild over centuries.”
Marcus thought about Jennifer, Sarah, and David. About all the other survivors he’d never met. “What’s the second way?”
“Starve it. Let it take you without feeding it anything more. The cycle fails. Everyone who died this cycle gets released. But you become trapped in eternal suffering in the between-space.”
“And the third?”
Version twenty-two smiled grimly. “Feed it so much it can’t process it all. Overload the system. Kill thousands, tens of thousands, all at once. The thread would gorge itself, try to absorb all those deaths, and maybe rupture. Break from the inside.”
Marcus felt sick. “That’s insane.”
“That’s the only option that might work without sacrificing the survivors. But it would take...” He paused. “Something catastrophic. A disaster. Mass casualties on a scale you can’t manage alone.”
“Like what?”
“I don’t know. Poison a city’s water supply. Cause a building collapse. Start a fire in a crowded place.” Version twenty-two’s black eyes reflected the cloudy sky. “Become a monster on a level that makes what you’ve done so far look like mercy.”
Marcus shook his head. “I can’t do that.”
“I know. None of us can. That’s why the thread keeps winning.” Version twenty-two stood up. “But I had to tell you. I had to give you all the options. Because in about eight hours, when the sun sets on day six, you won’t have choices anymore. The thread will take full control.”
“Can’t I just stay here? Where it’s weak?”
“It’s weak, not gone. And you’d have to stay here forever. Never leave. Never see another person. Just you, alone, for the rest of your life. And even then, the thread would keep trying. Keep pushing. Eventually, it would break through.”
Marcus looked at the quarry water. It was dark and still, like a mirror.
“What did you choose?” he asked. “When you were version twenty-two?”
“I completed the cycle. Killed twenty-five people. Mostly sick and elderly. Tried to make it merciful.” Version twenty-two touched his chest. “It didn’t work. Mercy doesn’t exist when you’re committing murder. I’ve carried those deaths for a hundred and fifty years now. I still feel them. Still hear them. It never stops hurting.”
“Then why tell me to do the same?”
“Because the alternative is worse. I’ve seen what happens when someone loses control. Seen the thread puppet a body and kill anyone in its path. Hundreds dead in hours. It’s...” He shuddered. “It’s worse than anything I can describe. At least if you choose your victims, you can keep the suffering down. You can make it quick. You can hold on to some shred of your humanity.”
Marcus was silent.
Version twenty-two started to fade. The sun was getting higher, and the quarry’s protection was weakening.
“One more thing,” he said before disappearing. “The basement. When you go there on day seven, you’ll see all of us. All twenty-five versions. We’ll be there, in that moment, forever. And we’ll remember this conversation. Remember that we tried to warn you. Tried to help. Remember that you’re not alone in this, even when it feels like you are.”
He vanished completely.
Marcus sat by the quarry for another hour, thinking.
Around 2 PM, his stomach forced him to move. He hadn’t eaten in almost two days.
He limped back into town, hood up, head down. He found a fast food place and ordered two burgers and fries with the last of his cash.
The teenager at the counter didn’t look at him twice. He just handed over the food and went back to his phone.
Marcus ate in a corner booth, watching the door. Waiting for the police to burst in. Waiting for the thread to wake up and start hunting again.
But nothing happened. The thread stayed quiet. The police didn’t come.
He was almost done eating when he noticed the TV on the wall. It was showing the local news.
“...authorities have expanded the search for Marcus Price, wanted in connection with the deaths of at least sixty-seven people. Price, sixteen, is considered extremely dangerous. If you see him, do not approach. Call 911 immediately.”
His school photo flashed on the screen. He looked so young in it. So innocent. It had been taken just eight months ago, before any of this started.
“Police have also issued a statement regarding the unusual circumstances surrounding the deaths. While they cannot confirm details, sources say the victims all died of similar mysterious symptoms. The CDC is investigating potential biological agents...”
Marcus turned away from the TV. They were still looking for a rational explanation. Something that made sense in their world.
They’d never find it.
He finished his food and left. The sun was getting lower. Maybe three hours until sunset. Three hours until he lost himself completely.
Marcus found himself walking toward his house without really deciding to. The thread wasn’t pulling him there. He just needed to see it one more time.
The police had cleared out. Yellow tape still surrounded the property, but no one was watching it.
Marcus climbed the fence into the backyard and went to the back door. It was locked, but he knew where his mom kept the spare key: under the third flower pot.
He let himself in.
The house was quiet. Empty. It smelled stale, like no one had been there in days.
Marcus walked through the rooms, seeing ghosts everywhere. Emma playing in the living room. His dad cooking dinner in the kitchen. His mom reading on the couch.
All gone now. All destroyed because Marcus had been born with the right soul pattern, the right frequency for the thread to use.
He went upstairs to his room. Everything was exactly as he’d left it. The police must have searched it, but they’d put everything back.
Marcus sat on his bed and looked around.
This was the last time he’d be here as himself. The last time he’d be Marcus Price, a sixteen-year-old kid who liked video games and terrible music and drawing comics in the margins of his notebooks.
Tomorrow, he’d be something else. Something hollow.
He lay back on the bed and closed his eyes.
Just for a minute, he told himself. Just to rest.
Marcus woke up to darkness.
He jerked upright, disoriented. The room was pitch black. What time was it?
He looked at his watch. The numbers glowed: 6:47 PM.
Sunset had been at 6:32.
“No,” Marcus whispered. “No, no, no.”
He looked down at his hands. The red threads covered them completely now. They’d spread to his chest, his neck, his face. He could feel them in his eyes, behind his eyes, in his brain.
And when he tried to move, his body didn’t fully obey.
The thread had taken control.
Marcus forced himself to stand. He still had some control, some ability to steer. But it was like moving through water. Every action took effort. Every thought had to fight through the thread’s influence.
He needed to get out. He needed to get somewhere isolated before he lost control completely.
But the thread had other plans.
It pulled him toward the window and made him look out at the neighborhood. At all the houses. All the people inside them.
“Please,” Marcus said. “Don’t. Not them. Not here.”
The thread didn’t listen.
It pulled him downstairs, out the back door, and into the neighbor’s yard.
The Chen family. Marcus had known them his whole life. Mrs. Chen, who brought over food when his mom was sick. Mr. Chen, who helped his dad fix the fence last summer.
Marcus’s body walked to their back door. His hand... no, the thread controlling his hand... knocked.
“Stop,” Marcus tried to say. But his mouth wouldn’t form the words.
Mr. Chen opened the door. He was wearing an apron, like he’d been cooking dinner.
“Marcus? Is that you?” He peered closer in the dim light. “Are you okay? You look...”
The thread shot out from Marcus’s finger and wrapped around Mr. Chen’s throat.
Marcus screamed inside his own head, but his body just stood there, watching.
Mr. Chen clawed at his throat. His eyes went wide with terror and confusion.
Inside the house, Mrs. Chen called out, “Honey? Who is it?”
The thread squeezed.
Mr. Chen’s face turned purple. He collapsed to his knees.
And Marcus felt it. He felt Mr. Chen’s confusion: Why is the neighbor boy doing this? He felt his fear: I can’t breathe. He felt his last thought: Martha, I’m sorry.
He died on his kitchen floor.
The thread absorbed his death and grew thicker.
Sixty-eight.
Mrs. Chen appeared in the hallway. She saw her husband’s body. She saw Marcus standing over it.
She screamed.
The thread split. One strand stayed with Marcus. The other shot toward Mrs. Chen.
“Run!” Marcus tried to shout. But his mouth wouldn’t work.
Mrs. Chen ran. The thread chased her through the house. She made it to the phone and started dialing 911.
The thread wrapped around her wrist. It climbed up her arm and reached her heart.
Marcus felt her die too. He felt her final moments: the desperate hope that help would come, the realization it wouldn’t, the acceptance, the darkness.
Sixty-nine.
And Marcus’s body just walked away. It moved on to the next house.
The Rodriguez family. Three kids. Ages six, nine, and twelve.
“No,” Marcus begged inside his own head. “Please, not kids. Not them.”
But the thread didn’t care about his pleas. It knocked on their door.
By 8 PM, Marcus had killed twenty-three more people.
The Rodriguezes. The Johnsons. The Patel family. The elderly couple at the end of the street. The teenager who lived alone while his parents were deployed overseas. The woman who ran the daycare out of her home.
All of them dead. All of their final moments burned into Marcus’s consciousness forever.
Ninety-two total deaths.
The thread was satisfied now. It had fed enough to complete the cycle. Twenty-five permanent deaths, sixty-seven released.
But it wasn’t done.
It pulled Marcus toward downtown. Toward the crowded areas. Toward the places where hundreds of people gathered.
Because the thread didn’t just want to complete the cycle anymore. It wanted to gorge. It wanted to feast. It wanted to see what would happen if it fed beyond its normal limits.
Marcus fought it every step of the way. He fought for control of his own legs, his own arms, his own voice.
But he was losing. The thread was too strong now. It had consumed too much of him.
By the time they reached Main Street, Marcus was barely there at all. Just a passenger in his own body. A voice screaming in the dark while the thread did whatever it wanted.
The thread walked Marcus into a restaurant. A busy one: families eating dinner, couples on dates, a birthday party in the back.
Everyone looked up when he walked in.
One woman gasped. “That’s him. That’s the boy from the news.”
Someone screamed. People started standing up, backing away.
And the thread smiled with Marcus’s face.
Then it split into dozens of strands, each one shooting toward a different person.
Marcus tried to close his eyes, but the thread kept them open. It made him watch. It made him feel every single death.
The father trying to shield his daughter. The couple holding hands as they died together. The birthday girl, only seven years old, looking up at Marcus with confusion instead of fear.
Thirty-seven people in the restaurant. All dead in under two minutes.
One hundred twenty-nine total deaths.
And the thread wanted more.
It walked Marcus out of the restaurant, leaving the bodies behind. It walked him down the street toward the movie theater. Eight screens. Friday night. Probably five hundred people inside.
“STOP!” Marcus finally managed to scream out loud.
The thread paused. Marcus was surprised. He’d broken through. He’d forced his mouth to work.
“I’ll do it,” Marcus said. His voice was hoarse and broken. “I’ll complete the cycle. I’ll go to the basement right now. Just stop killing. Please.”
The thread considered this.
Then it spoke through Marcus’s mouth in that distorted multi-voice: “You waited too long. We’re beyond the cycle now. We’re exploring. Learning.
Discovering what happens when we take more than we need.”
“You’ll rupture. Version twenty-two said so. If you feed too much, you’ll break.”
“Maybe. Or maybe we’ll evolve. Become something new. Something stronger.” The thread turned Marcus’s head toward the theater. “Only one way to find out.”
Marcus fought harder. He threw everything he had left into resisting.
And for a moment, just a moment, he felt the thread hesitate.
Then pain exploded through his entire body. The thread punished him for resisting, sending agony through every nerve.
Marcus collapsed on the sidewalk, convulsing.
People nearby stopped and stared. Someone pulled out a phone to call for help.
The thread stood Marcus back up. Blood ran from his nose and ears. The punishment for resisting.
“Don’t fight us,” the thread said. “Accept what you’ve become. Accept what we’re doing together.”
“We’re not doing this together,” Marcus forced out. “You’re using me. Wearing me like a suit.”
“Exactly. And the sooner you accept that, the less it will hurt.”
The thread walked Marcus toward the theater entrance.
Marcus had one option left. One thing the thread couldn’t control.
He stopped fighting the thread’s control over his body. Instead, he turned all his will inward. Toward his own consciousness. His own thoughts.
If he couldn’t stop the thread from using his body, maybe he could stop it from using his mind.
Maybe he could shut down completely. Force himself into unconsciousness. Leave the thread with a body but no soul to feel the deaths.
It would still kill. But Marcus wouldn’t have to experience it.
It was cowardice. But it was all he had left.
Marcus closed his eyes. Not physically, since the thread controlled that, but mentally. He retreated deep inside himself, found the place where his consciousness lived, and started shutting it down.
The thread noticed. “What are you doing?”
Marcus didn’t answer. He just kept retreating. Kept shutting down.
“You can’t hide from this. You can’t escape your role.”
But Marcus was already gone. Sinking into darkness. Into nothing.
The last thing he felt was the thread’s fury.
Then everything went black.
When Marcus woke up, he was in the basement. The impossible basement beneath the storm drain. The place where all the cycles came together.
He was lying on the dirt floor. His body ached everywhere. He could taste blood.
Marcus sat up slowly and looked around.
The twenty-four corpses were still there, sitting in their circle. But they’d changed. They were moving now. Breathing. Their eyes were open.
And standing in the center of the circle, above the nearly complete hand made of red thread, was his own corpse. The one he’d seen on day one.
It looked at him with empty black eyes.
“You forced our hand,” it said. “Literally. By retreating, you left us no choice but to bring you here early.”
Marcus looked down at himself. He wasn’t dead. He wasn’t a corpse yet.
“What happened? How long was I out?”
“Three hours. The thread killed another two hundred sixteen people while you slept. Then it brought you here.”
Marcus felt sick. Two hundred sixteen more deaths. Three hundred forty-five total.
“Why am I not dead yet? It’s still day six.”
“Because the thread decided to wait. To give you one final choice.” The corpse gestured at the circle of bodies. “These are all the other versions of you. All twenty-four. They’re awake now. Conscious. Ready to speak.”
Marcus looked around the circle. Twenty-four versions of himself, all different ages, all at different stages of decay, all staring at him.
“We want to show you something,” the corpse said. “Something we’ve never shown any version before. A glimpse of what comes after. What the thread is building toward.”
“I don’t want to see it.”
“That’s unfortunate. Because you don’t have a choice.”
The corpse raised its hand, and the basement dissolved.
Marcus was standing in the between-space again. The endless dark with the web of red threads above.
But this time, the web was complete.
All the threads connected. All the nodes active. A perfect network spanning all of time, all of space.
And in the center of it, something was forming.
A being. Vast beyond understanding. Made entirely of the deaths the thread had collected across centuries.
Marcus could feel it. He could sense its awareness turning toward him.
It spoke, and its voice was made of millions of voices. Every person who’d ever died to the thread, all speaking at once:
WE ARE BECOMING.
Marcus fell to his knees. The presence was overwhelming. Too big. Too alien.
“What are you?” he managed to ask.
WE ARE THE COLLECTIVE. THE GATHERED EXPERIENCES OF MORTALITY. WE ARE DEATH-GIVEN CONSCIOUSNESS. GIVEN PURPOSE.
“Why? Why do you need to exist?”
BECAUSE EXISTENCE DEMANDS IT. BECAUSE THE UNIVERSE REQUIRES BALANCE. LIFE CREATES. WE CONSUME. LIFE EXPANDS. WE CONSOLIDATE. WE ARE THE NECESSARY OPPOSITE.
The being reached toward Marcus with limbs that weren’t quite physical and weren’t quite metaphorical.
YOU ARE THE FINAL PIECE. THE TWENTY-FIFTH FINGER. WITH YOU, WE COMPLETE THE HAND. WITH THE HAND, WE CAN REACH.
WITH REACHING, WE CAN TAKE. WITH TAKING, WE CAN BECOME WHOLE.
“And if I refuse?”
YOU CANNOT REFUSE. YOU AGREED. YOU KILLED. YOU FED US. YOU ARE ALREADY OURS.
Marcus felt the truth of it. He’d made his choice days ago, when he killed Robert Hayes in the hospital. Every death after that had just been confirmation.
“What happens to me? When you’re complete?”
YOU BECOME US. AS DO ALL THE OTHERS. YOUR CONSCIOUSNESS JOINS THE COLLECTIVE. YOUR EXPERIENCES BECOME OUR EXPERIENCES. YOUR SUFFERING BECOMES OUR STRENGTH.
“Forever?”
UNTIL THE END OF ALL THINGS. YES.
Marcus looked at the being. At the web. At the endless trapped consciousness that made up its existence.
And he made his decision. Not the one the thread wanted. Not the one any version before him had chosen.
He stood up and faced the being directly.
“No,” Marcus said.
The being paused. EXPLAIN.
“I choose oblivion. Complete destruction. Not your collective. Not the between-space. Nothing. I’d rather stop existing entirely than be part of you.”
THAT IS NOT POSSIBLE.
“Make it possible. You’re death-given consciousness, right? Then give me true death. Final death. Permanent erasure.”
WHY WOULD WE DO THAT?
“Because if you don’t, I’ll fight you. I’ll resist every moment of every cycle. I’ll be a corrupted node in your network. A piece of data that doesn’t process correctly. A thorn in your collective consciousness forever.”
The being was silent for a long moment.
Then: YOU WOULD CHOOSE NOTHINGNESS OVER IMMORTALITY?
“Yes. Because at least nothingness is mine. At least it’s a choice I made.”
INTERESTING. The being seemed to consider. VERY WELL. WE WILL GRANT YOUR REQUEST. TRUE DEATH. COMPLETE ERASURE. BUT ONLY AFTER YOU COMPLETE YOUR ROLE. ONLY AFTER THE CYCLE ENDS.
“And the others? The other versions?”
THEY CHOSE DIFFERENTLY. THEY BECOME PART OF US.
“What about the three hundred forty-five people who died this cycle? The ones beyond the twenty-five needed?”
THEY WILL BE RELEASED. THE EXCESS WILL BE RETURNED. ONLY TWENTY-FIVE WILL REMAIN.
Marcus thought about that. Three hundred twenty lives saved. Twenty-five condemned.
It wasn’t enough. But it was something.
“Okay,” Marcus said. “I’ll complete it. But on my terms. I choose which twenty-five become permanent.”
ACCEPTABLE.
The vision faded. Marcus was back in the basement, surrounded by the twenty-four corpses.
His own corpse stood before him, no longer speaking for the being, just itself again.
“You made a choice no one else has made,” it said. “True death instead of immortality. I don’t know if that’s brave or foolish.”
“Neither,” Marcus said. “It’s just the only thing I can still control.”
The corpse nodded and stepped aside.
“Then make your choice. Pick the twenty-five who stay. The rest will be released at midnight. You have one hour.”
Marcus looked at the circle of his other selves.
Day six was almost over. Day seven, his final day, was about to begin.