

Written by Raze Edgar
Published
Marcus sat in the center of the basement, surrounded by the twenty-four versions of himself.
They were all awake now. All watching him. Waiting.
He had to choose twenty-five people from the three hundred forty-five who’d died. Twenty-five who would stay dead permanently. The rest would be released, sent back to their bodies, waking up confused but alive.
It felt impossible. How could he decide who deserved to live and who deserved to die?
“You’re thinking about it wrong,” one of the corpses said. Version twenty, from 1775. “It’s not about who deserves what. It’s about who would suffer most from coming back.”
Marcus looked at him. “What do you mean?”
“Some of the people you killed were in pain. Terminal illness. Old age. They were dying anyway. Bringing them back just drags out their suffering.”
Version twenty gestured at the darkness. “Choose them. The ones who were already at the end. Let them rest.”
It made a terrible kind of sense.
Marcus closed his eyes and reached into his memories. All three hundred forty-five deaths were there, filed away in his mind. Each one complete with final thoughts, final feelings, final moments.
He started sorting through them.
The first was obvious: Robert Hayes, 87. Cancer throughout his body. He’d been grateful when Marcus ended it. He’d thanked him. Robert would be one of the twenty-five.
Mary Donnelly, 92. Heart failure. She’d been unconscious, in a coma. The doctors had said she wouldn’t wake up. She was number two.
David Morrison, 76. Liver failure. In constant pain despite the medication. Number three.
Marcus continued through the hospital victims. Sarah Williams. James Whitaker. Elizabeth Hart. Patricia Blake.
All of them had been dying. All of them had been in pain.
That was seven. He needed eighteen more.
Marcus moved through the other deaths. The ones from his neighborhood. The restaurant. The houses he’d visited on day six.
Mr. and Mrs. Chen. His neighbors. They’d lived full lives. They’d had children and grandchildren. But they’d died in terror. Died confused and afraid.
If they came back, they’d remember. They’d live the rest of their lives traumatized by what happened. Maybe death was kinder.
Marcus added them to the list. Numbers eight and nine.
The elderly couple at the end of his street, Arthur and Margaret Stevens. Both in their eighties. Arthur had Parkinson’s. Margaret had dementia.
Numbers ten and eleven.
The hardest part was the restaurant.
Thirty-seven people. Families. Kids. People with decades of life ahead of them.
Marcus went through each death carefully.
He found one: Harold Greene, 58. Terminal pancreatic cancer. He’d come to the restaurant for one last meal with his daughter before going into hospice. Number twelve.
Another: Linda Park, 66. Late-stage MS. She’d been in a wheelchair, losing motor control, struggling to eat. Number thirteen.
Marcus kept searching. He found four more people in the restaurant who’d been seriously ill. Who’d been facing their own deaths within months.
Numbers fourteen, fifteen, sixteen, and seventeen.
But that still left thirty-one people from the restaurant who were healthy. Who had years left.
He couldn’t justify keeping them dead. They’d come back. They’d live.
Marcus moved through the rest of the deaths.
The Rodriguez family. Three kids. He couldn’t keep them dead. Couldn’t justify it. They’d come back.
The Johnsons. A healthy couple in their forties. They’d come back too.
The teenage boy who lived alone. His whole life ahead of him. Coming back.
Marcus kept searching for the terminally ill. The suffering. The ones who’d been at the end anyway.
He found them scattered throughout the deaths. A woman with ALS. A man with end-stage kidney disease. Another with severe COPD. Numbers eighteen, nineteen, twenty.
Five more to go.
“You’re running out of time,” version twelve said. His corpse sat nearby, watching. “Midnight is in twenty minutes.”
Marcus looked at the remaining deaths. Over three hundred people who weren’t terminally ill. Who had time left.
He had to choose five of them to stay dead.
His hands shook.
“I can’t do this,” he said.
“You have to,” version twenty replied. “The being won’t let you leave until you choose.”
Marcus closed his eyes again and went back through the memories.
There had to be something. Some pattern. Some way to decide.
Then he found it.
Five people who’d died on day six, during the rampage when the thread had full control. Five people who, in their final moments, hadn’t felt fear or pain or confusion.
They’d felt peace. Like they’d been ready. Like some part of them knew it was time.
Marcus didn’t understand it. He didn’t know if the thread had done something to ease their passing, or if they’d truly been at peace.
But it was the only thing he had left to go on.
A man who’d been sleeping. He died in his dreams and never woke up. Number twenty-one.
A woman who’d been meditating. Her last thought had been about acceptance. Number twenty-two.
An elderly veteran who’d been writing a letter to his grandson. His last thought: I lived a good life. Number twenty-three.
A hospice nurse who’d spent her career helping people die with dignity. Her final thought: Finally, I understand. Number twenty-four.
One more.
Marcus went through the remaining deaths one more time.
He found her. A little girl. Six years old. She’d died in the restaurant.
But her final thought hadn’t been fear. It hadn’t been pain.
It had been: Mommy says angels come for good people. I see angels now. They’re so pretty.
Marcus’s heart broke. But he added her to the list.
Number twenty-five.
The moment he made the final choice, the basement changed.
The corpses all stood up at once. The hand above them pulsed with light.
And Marcus felt it. He felt the twenty-five deaths lock into place. Become permanent. Their consciousness absorbed into the collective, their experiences adding to the web.
The other three hundred twenty deaths were meant to be released. Sent back to their bodies across time, waking up gasping, confused, traumatized, but alive.
The cycle was complete. The hand was whole.
Marcus looked down at his own hands. The red threads were fading slightly. The being had gotten what it needed. It was releasing its grip on him.
But only slightly.
“What now?” Marcus asked the circle of corpses.
They all spoke at once: “Now you become the twenty-fifth finger. Now you take your place.”
The floor beneath Marcus opened up. Not physically; the dirt stayed solid. But some other dimension of space unfolded.
He was falling again. Into the between-space. Into the web.
But this time, he wasn’t falling to visit. He was falling to stay.
Marcus landed in darkness.
Not the between-space he’d seen before. Somewhere deeper. More fundamental.
He could feel the other twenty-four versions of himself nearby. He could sense their consciousness like lights in the dark.
And beyond them, millions of other lights. Every person who’d died to the thread across centuries. All of them connected. All of them part of the collective.
Marcus tried to move, but he had no body here. No physical form.
He was pure consciousness. Pure awareness.
And he could feel the being watching him. Examining him. Building him into the structure.
WELCOME, it said. YOU ARE NOW COMPLETE. THE HAND IS FORMED. THE FIRST PHASE IS FINISHED.
“First phase?” Marcus thought. He didn’t have a mouth anymore, but his thoughts seemed to carry.
YES. THE HAND WAS ONLY THE BEGINNING. NOW WE BUILD THE ARM. THE BODY. THE WHOLE.
Horror flooded through Marcus. “How many more cycles? How many more people have to die?”
THOUSANDS. PERHAPS TENS OF THOUSANDS. THE FULL FORM REQUIRES MANY PIECES.
“No. You said I could have true death. Complete erasure. That was the deal.”
AFTER THE CYCLE COMPLETES. THE CYCLE HAS COMPLETED. BUT YOU ARE STILL NEEDED. THE HAND REQUIRES ALL TWENTY-FIVE FINGERS TO FUNCTION. YOU CANNOT BE ERASED UNTIL YOUR ROLE IS FULFILLED.
“That could be centuries!”
OR MILLENNIA. TIME IS IRRELEVANT HERE.
Marcus tried to scream, but he had no voice. He tried to fight, but he had no body.
He was trapped. Just like all the others.
The being had lied. Or maybe it hadn’t lied. Maybe it just thought in time scales so vast that his human idea of “after the cycle” meant nothing.
Either way, he was stuck.
Marcus felt the other versions of himself nearby. He felt their consciousness brush against his.
Version twenty: “We tried to warn you.”
Version twelve: “There’s no escape. We’re part of it now.”
Version twenty-two: “The only mercy is that eventually, you stop feeling it as much. The pain dulls. The awareness fades. You become more thread than human.”
“How long does that take?” Marcus asked.
“Decades. Maybe centuries. Depends on how hard you fight it.”
Marcus wanted to cry, but he had no tears. He wanted to rage, but he had no strength.
All he could do was exist. Conscious but powerless. Aware but trapped.
Forever.
But then something changed.
A new consciousness appeared in the darkness. Not another version of Marcus. Someone else.
“Hello?” Marcus reached out toward it. “Who are you?”
The consciousness was faint. Struggling. But it spoke: “My name is Emma.”
Marcus froze. “Emma? My sister Emma?”
“Yes. I... I don’t understand what’s happening. Where am I?”
“You’re dead. The thread took you on day one.”
“I remember. The red thing on my finger. It hurt so much.” Her consciousness flickered. “Am I in heaven?”
“No. You’re in the web. The collective. You’re part of what the thread is building.”
“I don’t want to be here. I want to go home. I want Mom.”
Marcus tried to reach her, tried to comfort her, but he couldn’t touch her. He couldn’t hold her.
“I’m so sorry, Emma. This is my fault. All of it.”
“Marcus? Is that you?”
“Yeah. It’s me.”
“Where are you? I can’t see you.”
“I’m here. Right here. We’re both here. Both trapped.”
Emma was quiet for a moment. Then: “Are the angels coming? Mommy said angels come for good people when they die.”
Marcus’s heart, his consciousness, the thing that used to be his heart, broke completely.
“I don’t know, Emma. I don’t know if angels can reach us here.”
“I’m scared.”
“Me too.”
They stayed together in the darkness. Brother and sister. Both dead. Both trapped. Both fuel for something vast and hungry and incomprehensible.
Time passed. Marcus couldn’t tell how much. There was no day or night here. No change. Just endless awareness.
Other consciousnesses appeared now and then. People who’d died to the thread. Most faded quickly, absorbed into the collective. But some stayed conscious longer.
Marcus talked to them when he could. He tried to comfort them. Tried to explain.
It didn’t help much.
He also felt the being growing. He felt it using the deaths, the experiences, the suffering to build itself larger. The hand was complete, and now it was working on the wrist. The forearm.
Each new piece required more cycles. More deaths. More versions of Marcus across time, all feeding the same entity.
Version twenty had been right. Eventually, it did get easier.
The pain dulled. The awareness faded. Marcus found himself thinking less, feeling less, becoming less.
He was turning into pure data. Pure information. Just another node in the network.
And part of him, the part that was still human, was grateful. Because awareness was suffering. Consciousness was pain.
Better to fade. Better to become thread. Better to stop being Marcus Price and become just another piece of the collective.
But before he could fully fade, something else happened.
A rupture in the web.
Marcus felt it like an earthquake. He felt the entire structure shudder.
WHAT IS HAPPENING? the being’s voice echoed, confused, almost afraid.
The other versions stirred. Version twelve: “I don’t know. This has never happened before.”
Version twenty: “Something’s wrong. Something’s breaking.”
The rupture grew. A crack in the web. A tear in the structure.
And through the crack, Marcus saw something impossible.
Light.
Real light. Not the glow of the threads or the pulse of the hand. Actual, natural light. From outside the web. From the real world.
“How?” Marcus tried to ask, but the question dissolved in the chaos.
The rupture widened. The web started unraveling.
And Marcus heard a voice. Not the being’s voice. Not any version’s voice. A human voice. From outside.
“Hold on! I’m coming for you!”
The voice was familiar, but Marcus couldn’t place it. His memories were coming apart, dissolving with the web.
Everything was breaking apart.
The being screamed, a sound made of millions of voices in agony.
The threads snapped one by one.
The consciousnesses that had been trapped started spilling out through the crack, escaping back toward their bodies, back toward life.
Emma’s consciousness brushed past Marcus one last time. “Marcus! I’m going home! I’m going back!”
“Go!” Marcus tried to push her toward the light. “Get out of here!”
She vanished through the crack.
Others followed. The restaurant victims. The hospital patients. Everyone the thread had taken.
Even some of the older deaths. People from previous cycles who’d been trapped for decades.
All of them fleeing through the rupture. All of them escaping.
Except Marcus.
He was the twenty-fifth finger. The final piece of the hand. The web wouldn’t let him go.
He was an anchor. A foundation. A critical part of the structure.
As the web collapsed around him, he stayed trapped at the center.
The being’s voice, weaker now, damaged: YOU CANNOT ESCAPE. YOU ARE OURS. YOU ARE ETERNAL.
“Maybe,” Marcus thought back. “But at least I destroyed you.”
WE WILL REBUILD. WE ALWAYS REBUILD.
“Good. Then I’ll be waiting. And next time, I’ll break you again.”
The light from the crack was fading. The rupture was closing. Whatever had caused it was ending.
Marcus caught one last glimpse of the real world through the gap.
He saw the basement. He saw someone standing there. A woman with dark hair.
Cassidy? No. Different. Older.
She was holding something. A knife? A piece of glass?
She was cutting the threads. Cutting them physically.
That was what had caused the rupture. Someone in the real world was destroying the physical form of the web.
Marcus tried to call out to her. He tried to ask her to cut his thread too. To free him.
But the crack closed completely before he could make a sound.
Darkness returned.
The web was broken but not destroyed. Damaged but not dead.
The being was quiet now. Recovering. Healing.
And Marcus was alone.
The other versions had faded. The trapped consciousnesses had escaped. Even Emma was gone.
Just Marcus remained. The twenty-fifth finger. Forever.
He floated in the dark and waited.
Waited for the being to rebuild. Waited for the next cycle to start. Waited for the day someone would cut his thread and finally set him free.
If that day ever came.
But in the real world, in the basement beneath the storm drain, something was changing.
The corpses were crumbling. Turning to dust. The hand was dissolving.
And in the same hospital where she had died, a little girl named Emma Price woke up gasping.
Doctors and nurses rushed to her. Her mother, who was still a patient there, was brought to her and started crying.
“Mom?” Emma said. “What happened? Where’s Marcus?”
Her mother hugged her tight. “You’re alive. Oh god, you’re alive.”
All across town, people were waking up. In morgues, in funeral homes, in hospital beds. Three hundred twenty people who’d been dead were suddenly alive again.
The police were baffled. The doctors had no explanation. The media called it a miracle.
Only a few people knew the truth. And they weren’t talking.
Because in the basement, written in the dust where the corpses had been, was a message:
THE HAND IS BROKEN. THE CYCLE IS PAUSED. BUT THE WEB REMAINS. AND IN FIFTY YEARS, IT WILL TRY AGAIN.
Below that, in different handwriting:
FIND ME. SAVE ME. PLEASE.
It was signed with a single letter: M.